This is the first time I'm reading a story that has perspective based narration. The author tried his best to make each perspective unique and succeeded in it. I Enjoy the way the story is picking up the pace, The characters seems somewhat blunt, more focus on character's details or their nature would be nice.😊 Overall nice start for a potentially great story.
Fantasy · Vishal_Meliodus
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
This is the first time I'm reading a story that has perspective based narration. The author tried his best to make each perspective unique and succeeded in it. I Enjoy the way the story is picking up the pace, The characters seems somewhat blunt, more focus on character's details or their nature would be nice.😊 Overall nice start for a potentially great story.
The Gods Fear- Lucifer
Fantasy · Vishal_Meliodus