What does Gwen look like?
ch 0 5 First joke
Book&Literature · Nathe07
Maybe give the characters normal names? You write in English, so the readers are people who speak English. What kind of names? In America they are generally impossible to perceive. Leave Chinese names in China
The boy's name was Bai Ye. He had various disorders such as autism and mild schizophrenia, making him a "senior" patient in this sanatorium.
Anime & Comics · SkyImmortal_
Who is Francesca? Photo for me
ch 76 76) A date to enjoy
Book&Literature · Jerry153
You killed the Harry Potter story. Half the films were dramas about the boy who lived. He was the only one who survived the night of Voldemort's attack. Now that his parents were alive, that night did not exist. He didn't become a Horcrux. Now there is no drama with Harry's fate, no drama with Snag. Now it's JUST Harry Potter. "A boy who is a boy"
ch 27 27: Orion, and Encounters
Book&Literature · NyanTa
What does Daphne look like?
ch 18 18: Vault of Ice and Flamel
Book&Literature · NyanTa
Why is Dumbledore his grandfather? Dumbledore is just his grandmother's brother, nothing more. Stupid logic
ch 16 16: Feeling of Betrayal and the Mirror
Book&Literature · NyanTa
Why did you do that?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: System
Movies · ZoroTraineeWriter
hahahaha. you want too much.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
"My last wish is to be immortal"
Movies · Daraine_Murphy
What?
ch 0 -2 MC Looks/Bio/Abilities
TV · Kazuyaaa
AND? All? This is the end? You didn't last long. Woe writer
ch 0 -2 MC Looks/Bio/Abilities
TV · Kazuyaaa
Why so abruptly? Nothing foreshadowed such thoughts in the head of the protagonist. What the heck?
ch 58 Dilemma of two lovers
Anime & Comics · David_555
By the way, an interesting fact: contact lenses were once made of glass. And they were very uncomfortable to wear.
ch 92 Optical
Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.
Book&Literature · Nathe07