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I really liked this ff I hope we get more chapters soon Is sucks that we stopped getting updates especially when we finally got to the good part

This author can never commits to a novel

One of the best ff i have ever read so please keep up the great work and don’t drop this masterpiece

It’s crazy how good the writing quality is for a fanfic. Usually these fanfics are so predictable but this is quite unique and a breath of fresh air and i can feel a plot brewing aswell. Anyways please don’t drop and keep up you have talent brother or sister

I didn’t like it much at the start cause of the confusing power system but eventually i grew to like it after taking brakes from it a couple times

Hello i subbed for patrean and read the unreleased chapters and i’d like to give you a feedback that maybe you can use to improve the story and correct some mistakes. To be honest the interactions between characters is alright and good but there is a lot of unrealistic stuff that put me off like how he built a mansion underground while being idk like 7 and how he afforded it when his parents didn’t leave him much wealth sense you mentioned that pretty much all they left him is the shadow clone jutsu and the house as inheritance and then i feel like you made the mc just too op of the bat as in he has enough chakra to make enough shadow clones to turn into birds and cover the entire uchiha clan compound as they release flyers and not to forget that you made characters have very low IQ. Idk if you didn’t research Naruto enough or maybe you weren’t going for a proper and realistic type of ff but please pay attention and make something great that everyone can remember and if you need inspiration i recommend Naruto: Dream to Immortality fanfic

Thanks

I love Naruto ff and i’ve read a couple of your novels although i didn’t like how the ONE P one turned out but i liked the HxH and the marvel one Anyways is this gonna be a villain mc i mean he doesn’t have to be but at least make him antihero cuz i never get the naive and the good and selfless for the sake of being selfless MC’s like it’s just not relatable like aren’t humans selfish and self perseverant

Don’t say we

You don’t even know what opinion means so why would you think I’ll bother get in an argument with you😂😂😂

Your mums a whore so no point taking your opinion

It started of good but then you made itach go out of character making him a grown man behave like a bottled up 8 year old and addicting the little brother role passively. SO THANKS A LOT FOR RUINING SOMETHING GOOD