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I dont know, everything is good but something make ruin everything. It just like author want to delay MC from become OP. You know, MC have everything. Superior Game Knowledge + Superior Race, but the way he grow up didnt even potrayed him. It is really like author just want to delay MC from getting stronger ahead. MC is thinking this and that much, keep talking need to get stronger asap but act slowly out of nowhere. I hope author can correct it in the future story. Story is already good, so just dont hinder mc from getting stronger.

: i dont know u change everything from real record that make confused, the story should be enjoyable but the change of all character, world building make me confused. Did author expect us as reader to know the world author build without such explanation if author change almost everything about the football story goes? Like creating new people. How we can knew about their dominant skill to follow up the story. Really everything should be fine if author just take the real person or just make a explanation/description if author want make every player are new. I hope author try to research more about football then add that to the story. It just like random people wrote about football, not some football enthusiast wrote it