1olip0p

5mth

Posted

Brother, it's hard to understand the story because you keep changing from first person to third person in the middle of a sentence

Kakashi: A new life another world

Anime & Comics · Aphis

1olip0p

8mth

Commented

pic of the mc?

ch 0 5 For the love of-!

Reincarnated with JJK Powerset in Harry Potter!

Anime & Comics · Feather_Duster_

1olip0p

8mth

Commented

Listen, I don't want to sound like a hater, but serious, you had to go with the mc unconscious trope that he will lose, I don't hate the fanfic, I really love it google translate

ch 27 Risking it all

Blue lock: the true egoist

Anime & Comics · Saint_Hubris

1olip0p

10mth

Commented

?

ch 0 3 Word Filler

Question According to what I read, you say that Owen Knight is a few years older than the MC, so how is it going to be in the story while the main cast is in high school and the MC is going to be in middle school? (google translate)

ch 10 Chapter 10: Pedaling Forward

Windbreaker: The Biking Guy

Anime & Comics · Cauliflowipz

1olip0p

10mth

Posted

The story was good until the mc became a pedophile .......................................................................................................

Singularity in Primal Chaos [Completed]

Anime & Comics · meatball_san

1olip0p

10mth

Commented

+1

Tower of god

Fate/Scp: Epic of The Demiurge

Anime & Comics · Demon_King22

1olip0p

11mth

Posted

I liked the story but because it's so slow it will take at least 800 chapters to reach the time skip and that's not my cup of tea

One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

1olip0p

11mth

Posted

I'm sorry, I really want to read this story, but it's hard for me to read a story with a MC who hides his powers -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Playing God Across Anime Worlds

Anime & Comics · NomadLayman

1olip0p

1yr

Commented

You could maybe stop putting spaces at the beginning of every sentence it seems out of order. Sorry, it's hard to understand me, English is not my language [google translate]

ch 19 Substitute President

Electronic Musician's Transmigration

Music & Bands · Nova_Shadowsky

1olip0p

1yr

Commented

+1

5. Potential to use all categories at 100% as a system reward

Into the Hunter x Hunter world with Jujutsu Kaisen System

Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Clara

1olip0p

1yr

Replied to Oniisama

Transported to a parallel fictional world

"I worked out over the summer, so this happened," Shishio said helplessly as his skin became slightly darker. However, instead of making him ugly, it enhanced his manliness for some reason. If he had to say, he was like those characters who stole the heroines or the mothers on the NTR manga.

I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo

Anime & Comics · akikan40

1olip0p

1yr

Commented

2

ch 111 Note: Future Fanfiction

Transported to a parallel fictional world

Anime & Comics · TotherWindow1

1olip0p

1yr

Posted

The story started well but lately the story is changing for the worse at first Joe was smart and would think about what to do before he did it now all he does is to be screwed in any situation where there is something to be screwed with for example whenever he finds a dragon egg he tells For the whole world it's his birthright or it's okay that he's drinking from someone's drink, that she's known for killing her husband with poison Sorry if there are problems error I used in google translate