Webnovel Author: Waniashahid7867 - Novel Collection

It's better than before. It think you should write a little bit more of it overall it was good and I have to say you have improved a lot

Can be more better but was very good can't wait for part 4 The characters are very exciting and can't wait to find out the male lead's name and personality The way you write about anything character and describe their feature that is heart touching and you have improved a lot since your first novel