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Why would her daughter be in a commercial?

There was a vast sky which showed several characters fighting against one another. One of them was a beautiful blonde-haired woman currently equipped in white armor and had feathered angelic-like wings. In this commercial, she battled against a blue-skinned and horned guy wearing a black cape. The two were blasting one another with magic-like effects…

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

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...I think you need an editor.

Perhaps I should ask Rita, my friend? She's coming today before lunch to ask for advice., At the moment, she's currently preoccupied with her little kid, so she always comes here to ask me for tips on how to raise her baby.

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

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YO

Derek was ecstatic, and not only because this world had magic, but also because as soon as he heard the word Ekidu, he had felt something clicking inside of him.

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Fantasy · Legion20

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This book is amazing! From chapter one we are thrown straight into the action of this compelling story! I will now review with the webnovel system. The writing quality is a B+ or A-Grade, putting this author miles ahead of the others on webnovel. A few nitpicks I would put here is to proofread your sentences and make sure they make sense. Like, for example, you would often end a sentence prematurely. Stability of Updates is amazing. Story Development is awesome as well, nothing I can see regarding plot holes. It's a very emotional story. Character design is interesting, and the world is intriguing enough to make you want to know about it more. PS: AI generated covers cannot be copyrighted as AI isn't human, so you can use the cover for commercial purposes.

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