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I really loved your story and how it developed, it is a good plot. The character development is good and the overall story is also good, keep writing.

So are you saying fill the first chapter with a whole lot of information rather than providing the readers with the feel of the story? This novel is not about that bro, it is about our mc exploring a whole new world, and as we travel with our mc we may get to learn many new things and information as you mentioned. The other thing you mentioned, 'grammar' I guess you have a quite unique concept of it

Hello dear author, I really like the thought that you put into this novel. I also like the world-building you put in. The only thing I would say is that if you can try making it more interesting because I just feel a whole lot of information in your novel.

I really loved the story. This novel has become my new favorite. I really loved how deep the author thought about the emotions and concepts in this novel. I wish to see more updates in the future and all the best.

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Hello dear author I like your writing style and the start of the novel is really great. I like the action sequence in this novel. The only thing I would say to improve is your plot and your long dialogue because sometimes long dialogue scenes interrupt the flow of a scene. Keep doing the great work. Hope for future updates.

Your novel is really amazing and interesting. I really love both main characters and want to know more in the future.

A very great book. Really loved the plot and the development. The characters were also really good, I hope to see more in the future updates, keep developing................................................................................................

A really good story. I like how the plot develops. I am not a fan of cultivation novels but this novel is really good. I like how the brothers take care of each other. I like to see the future updated of this novel.

Very great plot and a really great work. Loved your concept about the alpha fisher. I like how the story develops and like to see future of this novel.

A very great wort, I really like the concept and the character design. The concept used was really great and the characters were also good. I like to see more in the future updates.

A very good novel, I like how the plot develops, and it is a very good read it kept you hooked. I really like the story, awaits for future updates.

A very good and different story. I really like the introduction part and how the flow of the story goes. I really hope to see more of your work in future.

Hello author, I really liked your work and I really loved how the story progressed and I really like the character design and I await for further updates

I really loved your novel. Your writing style is very unique and I really like to follow your story and keep up your good work and looking forward to future updates.

Very nice story, I loved your plot and how you define your characters and your concept of astral realm, I really am looking forward to the progress of this story and keep on the good work.