Sangat kacau, melenceng dari cerita utama
Dua tahun ngapain aja? Idiot ga berguna udah di kasih kesempatan bagus malah di sia-sia kan, sungguh orang tolol yg mendapat kesempatan surgawi.
Ini cerita tentang perkembangan kerajaan?atau jalan mc?terlalu banyak omong kosong dan terlihat membosankan, saya tidak mengerti bagaimana penulis mempunyai ide ini, seperti bocah puber
His territory is under attack he doesn't even know about it? Does he even care? Trash
Why is no one blaming the mc? He left his partner in danger without any preparation. And the funny thing is he himself is angry about this, it kills me
The stupidest mc fanfic I've ever read. Idiots
This damn family drama, where is the majesty of a captain?cuihh
"Self-esteem? This is killing me 😹"
Just say no, how hard can it be? This nonsense is truly disgusting, way too cliché
Alur yang kacau
Portgas D. Ace : Sovereign of The Flame
Anime & Comics · TranslatingFanfics