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Xeos_Yoshimori
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is it father hmm. if so, this story just got a hella lot more interesting. couldn't be hohenhime he died at the end next to his wife's grave. Father could have escape from truth again like the first time hmmmmm.
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I agree I just want to have a tramatic past that he can work towards. just cause I'm speeding up the process doesn't mean I don't want what's best. like I said in some comments that this is my first story. also he literally a kid and kids are impressionable. so changing behavior is a thing. he also has a split personality that I haven't done much yet since I want to age him up before hand. I thank you for your honest opinion and I appreciate your input. Thank you very much for checking out my story. if you have any ideas you want this story to have just let me know and I'll see if I can work it in.
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thank you
"Of course your welcome. Your safe here now and don't be afraid to ask me anything. The boy shyly nodded his head and ran behind the bed to hide. Ryuu giggled at his shyness and left to go back to work. 2 hours later and Xeos was getting bored and wanted to explore more outside. He wrote a note asking her if he can go out and get some fresh air and then went to sleep since he didn't know when she will come up.
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no exactly like you said. just two different personalities that you'll see him have. like if he's pushed to far or way too scared because of a certain situation he might switch to the other personality that would be the safest for him. in reality he has 3 personalities one is the shy one. the other the kill mood. the last one is the one you have seen this last chapter which is his cautious personality or in his case normal personality
{Hey guys just wanna say that if Xeos ever recovers from this don't except him to be completely normal. He'll have a split personality. One as a shy boy who needs help and the other a ruthless killing machine. So if i have him acting childish well one he is 8 and two he is messed up. Also I'm gonna refer to Xeos as he from now on to avoid confusing. I was using i and realized that it could be confusing so yeah sorry about that. Thank you for your patience. I'm new to writing for other people and tend to make mistakes. Also i know that Ryuu is acting different in this but please just give this Ryuu a try. Also one last thing regarding the timeline. It's two years after Ryuu killed off the Rudra Familia and 3 years till canon when bell enter the city. So in 3 years the canon will began and make sure to read the Authors note at the bottom seriously it's an important question.}
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yea for sure. that's what I was planning. I just didn't want to write 30 chaps to develop their relationship and people dropped it because it's taking too long. I wanna write a chapter or 2 more to deepen the friendship / bond. Then skip ahead.
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he will later on
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also when the action comes into play the chapters will be longer by how much I don't know but 馃憤
{Hey guys just wanna say that if Xeos ever recovers from this don't except him to be completely normal. He'll have a split personality. One as a shy boy who needs help and the other a ruthless killing machine. So if i have him acting childish well one he is 8 and two he is messed up. Also I'm gonna refer to Xeos as he from now on to avoid confusing. I was using i and realized that it could be confusing so yeah sorry about that. Thank you for your patience. I'm new to writing for other people and tend to make mistakes. Also i know that Ryuu is acting different in this but please just give this Ryuu a try. Also one last thing regarding the timeline. It's two years after Ryuu killed off the Rudra Familia and 3 years till canon when bell enter the city. So in 3 years the canon will began and make sure to read the Authors note at the bottom seriously it's an important question.}
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yeah sorry my brain doesn't really work that way. I write in the moment so even I don't know how this story will go or how it will it end. that's just the kind of writer I am. I hope it doesn't bother you to much.
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I think I put it in authors note but I'll see if I can add it.
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Let me know what you guys think. if I should upload another chapter or not.
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well depends on which series brotherhood or just FMA
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