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Gee, I wonder what else that may have been.

[Not the first thing she's given to me? Has she given me anything else? I don't remember anything.] 

Chosen By The Lover's Constellation

Chosen By The Lover's Constellation

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Oh yeah, the mind powers, that helps quite a bit.

With a force that seemed to tear the air itself, the weapons flew from the soldiers' hands, hurtling towards Tia with a series of sharp, resonating clangs. Soldiers yelped in surprise and pain, their hands empty and trembling. The sound of metal striking the deck reverberated through the room.

Reborn: My Two Systems at War

Reborn: My Two Systems at War

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I’ve noticed starting a chapter or so ago, you started using you/your and that is implying a switch of POV from using I/mine, which is really confusing and jarring to read, this paragraph is a good example of that, really good story so far by the way.

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