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you writing is quite good i only feel you should add more characters for movie and other work of Fujiko F. Fujio and write more stable besides that this book is good
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5mth
Commented i use all my 3 stones
ch 176 Chapter offer
HP: The Arcane Thief
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
8mth
Commented How about a cultivation world we mc can use his own power not doreamon gadgets how about:- Spare me great lord
ch 28 Which world should the mc visits to?
I'm really in the Doraemon!?
Anime & Comics · NewComer714
9mth
Commented lord Ganesha
I don't think this needs to be asked but who do you think the second person is?
I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.
Fantasy · ForManaga
nobita is becoming little by little like his old self in ch-12 he was like he only cared about his close one in ch-22 he becoming like his old self. make him more OC and skipping his training is a good or bad plot hole you you deside . to left my final conclousion of writing this comment is to express more deployment on nobita character and make him more ooc. And good writing this story Best of luck
A New Nobita
Urban · Anime_boy12