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PerditaTritonia
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I didn't expect to be so invested on this story. I was really impressed with the story. A few grammatical issues and tense errors here and there but that never deterred my interest from not finishing the story!! Keep up the good work Author!!
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Commented The fight scenes seemed a bit rushed compared to before with the first guardian(?)
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Commented I love how descriptive you write about the environment and the battle scenes
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Commented He's so nice and compassionate towards fellow spirits!!!
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Commented What's wrong with preferring a staff over a sword?
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Commented I like the character development that he didn't beat himself too much
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Commented It was kinda funny about the Elites flipping sides
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Commented It's like I'm reading about a character I play in a MMOrpg game
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. I'll try to update once I've healed my wrist.
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