YoUrWiTchGraNdma

YoUrWiTchGraNdma

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I'm obsessed with cultivation that I might become an immortal soon 👾👾👾

2022-08-29 Joined Nigeria
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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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Your author here,I appreciate every honest thoughts on my book,drop yours so I can improve 😉

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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This is a great book I highly recommend it 💯

YoUrWiTchGraNdma
YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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this is a great book I highly recommend it 💯

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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this is the type of novel I love most, keep updating 💪

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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The characters are great and the plots are also captivating Kee it up 💪

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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my honest review . The first chapter is definitely catchy for those who like it, but we are in Ramadan period it's a turn off for Muslim readers,I had to skip. secondly,the first few chapters of a book should have catchy conflicts and depict the direction where your book wants to take,that will make a readers mind determined to continue to read it, rather than contemplating whether to read or not. that's not necessarily a flaw but I think you might want to know . use less of big grammars,a lot find it overwhelming, too much descriptions is also not advisable ,it make people lose focus of the main elements you want to portray. all in all ,I believe you can improve, keep it going 💪

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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I have corrected it,thank you 🤝, you can always notify me if you find any issue along the chapters 🫰

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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This book has a great plot and catchy characters, keep it up 💪

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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I'm deeply impressed by this book , following 🤝✔️

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YoUrWiTchGraNdma
1 years ago
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Hello everyone here is your author I'll shamelessly ask you to take your time to give me a great review , I'll appreciate it ,I promise 😊. don't forget to vote for your favorite chapters as well add to your library to get updated. this novel is just beginning and you don't wanna miss the great journey of our ML ❤️

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