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The system and the world-building is great, it's just that the author doesn't explore all the interesting things he creates at the start(for example, who is the entity within Lin Xin that saved her from the Saints, that the Club has almost no story importance...), and after 1500ish chapters, it just feels too rushed and the MC develops too quickly while his friends and imperial monsters are left behind. He also becomes too overpowered without practically any effort. I think it could be very easily fixed by just rewriting the story since when the MC achieved heavenly god-level. I also think that the MC should have gone to the universe right after elevating to heavenly god-level, or just before elevating to lord-level in the latest to give the reader a perspective of his abilities.

If you don't like complaining, maybe you should stop doing it yourself, don't you think?

If you don't like complaining, maybe you should stop doing it yourself, don't you think?