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I think him stealing other people’s songs is kind of scummy, you don’t need to create a whole song just the idea behind it.

Why is he even arguing with this shrew? just kill her already! He’s got godlike powers while she’s just an average woman, he’s obviously not going to convince her of anything so why bother?

I considered removing this from my library because I thought it was dropped, glad I didn’t.

God there is so much author explanations and recaps that there is hardly an actual novel if you stripped it all away.

I hate it when authors do this breaking the fourth wall thing, it's jarring and cringeworthy.

Probably too late but divination would be perfect for mc, he can calculate all variables with his heightened intelligence.

I hate it when authors do this, if you're not going to post a chapter then don't post the chapter, Why make a notice like this, all it does is make me click thinking there's a new release and get annoyed when we see a message like this.

You should try to improve your writing and actually write more than 4 chapters before dropping a story and then maybe people would be more willing to give you money for your "hobby".

I just don't think you're good/dedicated enough at writing to expect to be paid for your work.

Don't listen to him author, it's a cool plot. I like how mc is able to rectify some of his "mistakes" and grow by taking in a disciple similar to him.

Forgot about that, we haven't seen the ocean since the first chapter. I don't have a map of Pandora in my head, in my mind a savanna should be more inland.

I thought he was in the middle of a jungle/savanna nowhere near the sea?

No, it's really good. I was just surprised at how much effort you put into the translation, researching etc, you went beyond what I expect for a translation, in a good way it improves the experience. thx