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Very wrong, my friend. The story will improve a lot after the time jumps, and you will be surprised when you see what the Mc will do to me, the Children of Destiny, and this remains my personal opinion, and you may like it or not like . Sorry if there are some or many grammatical errors in my comment, as this is not my mother tongue

Sorry for the previous evaluation, it was written in Arabic, a sweet and wonderful novel - with good potential. I only ask you, author, not to let the novel perish by losing your passion for it. I hope this comment encourages you to keep going. May your passion revive and carry new chapters.

رواية حلوة و رائع🤩 تمتلك امكانيات🥳 جيد أرجو فقط منك أيها المؤلف ألا تدع الرواية تضيع بسبب فقدان شغفك بها😭😭 أرجو من هذا التعليق أن يشجعك على استمرار أتمنى أن يحيى شغفك 🥺🥺🥺😍وتحميل فصول جديد

The story is good and the background of the world is very excellent. Most of the Chinese narrators contain only a monotonous and repetitive plot that makes you feel bored and without interruption.