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Wow, for the first time ever, someone has actually mentioned what happens after death! :O
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Not bad. Not bad. Just needs a bit more 'explosions' to gain some attention I guess. Keep it up, Distil! Sad to see that the story had to end so early. Only when things were starting to get 'interesting'! XD
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Shooot! I was expecting a little bit of romance there... 馃槥
The writer's fate faced another hiccup, as he found himself in a new scenario. A drastic jump down a gradient of inferior quality. Instead of the heavenly white palace he was in seconds ago, dull and dark metallic bars of iron welcomed him.
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
This elf lady kinda reminds me of Aqua from Konosuba (anime).
"NO!" she yelled out, her voice unusually loud. "L'Esson, dear nectar... Please DON'T LEAVE ME!!"
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
This writer guy read my mind! I was about to say the same. 馃槤
'Crap... It feels like I'm in an immersive version of a Shakespearean play.'
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
An ELF! I KNEW IT!!!!
The writer noticed extravagant ears protruding from the garden of the woman's hair. An elf, he noted.
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
Such poetic detail... 馃槷馃憦
Her eyes were almonds brimming with brilliance upon her flawless face. Irises pulsing with concentric rings of colors he had never seen before. Her angled eyelashes guided the right amount of light to complement her already overflowing aura of grace. Her lips, like hills of pastel pink skin, stood proudly at a placement more unique than the golden ratio.
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
I'm sensing an anime girl vibe here. 馃樅
"Death?" a voice slithered into his ears so cute and pristine, the writer was scared the sensation may kill his vulnerable heart. Turning back, he discovered that the woman just woke up from her insoluble slumber. "Um... why would you be bringing about the topic of death?"
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
Eww.... a bug?! For real????
It was ACTUALLY a bug - the size of a bluebottle, now resting in the valley of the blanket over and between his legs. But the most elegant of insects he had ever seen! Unlike the anatomically-awkward arthropods creeping and crawling on Earth, this beetle-like creature was adorned with gold. Feathered wings in place of the typical translucent.
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
So much death.... 馃檨
The writer contracted the curtains of his cold eyes - perhaps for the last time on Earth. On the bright side, if at all, he slightly felt excited to finally be able to smell and taste life's greatest recipe - death.
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
Interesting how you managed to breath life into non living objects like paper, wood, glass.
Innocent and helpless, the glass window shattered on impact with the writer's body. The laws of physics are partial to none, the window knew. It tried its best not to allow the writer to break through. Sadly, the fractures in its embodiment wounded its non-living soul, losing its life before the writer's off-balance body penetrated its own.
Prison of Sentience
Fantasy 路 Distil
Loved the horror concept. Could've been honed to a sharper edge, I guess.
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This moment feels a troupe out of every anime/manga. But in this case, it's a well-planned one. Would have been better if you could present the thrilling elements with more 'weight' to them, I guess.
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One One One
Action 路 Distil
The action details here are cool.
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One One One
Action 路 Distil
Oh no, this author is very cunning! He ain't gonna let us sleep for the night. Too many curiosities about what happens next! I'm gonna vouch for House Hull. Let's see if they can survive.
Genesis Era
Sci-fi 路 GE17