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I bet Vincent is going to have to kill James as part of the curse
Noah offered a small smile, "I have already decided the future I want to lead, you should make sure your future is safe too, unless something comes around the corner and disrupts it."
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Though I guess she did have a “mother figure” in the slave establishment and her amazing adoptive mother until she was around 15
With her rebirth as a human and lack of her past memories until a week ago, she had been blessed with a family. A family who loved and treated her well as she grew up again with the same physcial features. To be the person she had been.
Heidi and the Lord
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I wonder how different she would be with a totally different upbringing. I’m sure if she really had lived a past life she would have the same personality, but would she be as brave or sassy if she hadn’t developed such a strong sense of herself early on through her trials?
With her rebirth as a human and lack of her past memories until a week ago, she had been blessed with a family. A family who loved and treated her well as she grew up again with the same physcial features. To be the person she had been.
Heidi and the Lord
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Corsets should be made to fit the owner, curvy or not. They’re only meant to cinch in a bit at the waist and create a flat profile, they’re not meant to be tight everywhere and negatively affect breathing.
It was then that the butler realized she was walking too stiff like a rock being moved. On his master's orders, he had provided her with clothes that were usually kept for the female guests who arrived at the mansion and being the butler he should have known that the girl in front of him would not fit in them after all she didn't share similar frame like the vampiress or the humans from the elite class.
Heidi and the Lord
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I get if the dress is poorly fitting, but to see stories constantly have tight lacing in corsets is kind of old. It would have been very uncommon to wear them tight enough to affect breathing at all. They were not torture devices, they were underwear worn by most women in some form for hundreds of years.
Along with the Lord and his cousin who were going to the invitation destination, Heidi was asked to attend as well as she was the future possible wife of Warren Lawson. She was in her room getting ready with a maid helping her dress up in an expensive dress. As she held the bedpost the maid pulled her dress strings from behind making her hands tighten around the wood she held on to. Every time the maid pulled the string it caused her breath to come out in shallow gasps. Unlike for the one whom this dress was made for her body didn't fit in perfectly and therefore she could do nothing but bear with it for now as it was her first week in the mansion and the clothes which were promised to be sent were yet to reach, which she doubted her family would do.
Heidi and the Lord
Fantasy · ash_knight17
This is reminding me of Under the Oak Tree quite a bit.
Killorn was intently observing her. His wife was in tears and he didn't even have a handkerchief to offer her. He curled his fingers into a fist. If only he had one.
Alpha's Cruel Addiction
Fantasy · Xincerely
Maybe Eve’s skin absorbs it? to keep the scales at bay? In that case there might not be much in the water anymore
She walked towards the bathtub, staring at the surface of the water for a couple of minutes. She dipped her hand into the water, lost in thought before pulling the stopper out and allowing the water to drain.
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I am in fact a highly educated native English speaker. My point was that the way the author is using “let us” is perfectly valid. Like the Oxford comma, it is a stylistic choice of the author to use contractions or not. True, ”let us inside” is a demand and that can exclusively be used without the contraction. That just clearly isn’t what the author is doing. Let us put this to rest, for I don’t think either one of us means harm.
The crooked smile on the pureblooded vampire's lips appeared, and he remarked, "Let us not waste anymore time then."
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
For example: “Let’s help them” and “Let us help them” mean the same thing. It’s the same phrase that just describes calling a group to action.
The crooked smile on the pureblooded vampire's lips appeared, and he remarked, "Let us not waste anymore time then."
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
They are the same in your explanation as well. What are you suggesting Let’s is an abbreviation of?
The crooked smile on the pureblooded vampire's lips appeared, and he remarked, "Let us not waste anymore time then."
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Do the privilage chapters unlock every day as well? Or do we have to wait until October? :(
ch 226 Rainy midnight
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
Let us and Let’s mean the same thing. One is just an abbreviated version of the other. Like What is and What’s
The crooked smile on the pureblooded vampire's lips appeared, and he remarked, "Let us not waste anymore time then."
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I feel like she has very prominent fangs and she’s ashamed
"D-don't look at me…" uttered the little girl.
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I bet she has huge fangs that don’ pull in. Would explain why she never smiles or talks around her.
Eve picked up her lunchbox and stepped out of the room. She started to walk in the corridor when she noticed the little girl following her. She stopped and turned to ask the little one,
Allure Of The Night
Fantasy · ash_knight17
AGAIN with all the corset misconceptions. Author if you don’t like them, don’t have all your female leads wear them.
Taking the housemaid's help, Vivian got ready in the black gown like dress which Leonard had picked out for her. The most painful part of the dressing was when her back was pulled tightly as she held on to the bedpost which she was sure was going to leave marks on her back. Thanking the woman for her help, she did her hair and applied the powder around her face and neck, applying a hint of pink gel to make her lips look pinker.
Bambi and the Duke
Fantasy · ash_knight17