Why aren't you uploading anything! I am dying waiting for more
ch 17 Prey Vs Predator
Eastern · proking
One horned poisonous rabbit
ch 17 Prey Vs Predator
Eastern · proking
Let me be blunt. It's not the grammar mistakes but the way you piece the sentences which makes some unable to enjoy the novel. You should write it like this...take this as an example. I just rewrote it right now so it is going basic but get an example from this. It was an incredible change brought by fate as person A and B got married. Not even three months had passed by that the news of (said person) becoming pregnant was heard. Alex was delighted to know of this news, his grandfather was also content with the fantastic news but (for whatever reason it could be) Dr. Jamie was horrified. Like this..change it into something that is readable, even if it is basic. It will be gun for others
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1: RESTRAINT SYSTEM
Urban · glitzywrite
Another chapter is here! the world is slow-building and it actually makes it more fun to read their daily events. keep up...waiting for more
ch 13 Situation Looks Serious!
Eastern · proking
Ok! I agree with you but it isn't garbage. Sometimes it is necessary to add details to make the readers feel like they are inside the world they are reading. The author will get better with time.
What!? Never seen a Demon King of Lust before?
Urban · Kira_Kazuto_4040