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First of all: I like the idea and story so far. But: imo the reaction of Ezio to the speech at school (Will of Fire) was kinda unexpected. I mean that guy leads a group of Assassin's with a few but strict rules, fighting against those that seek control. So it felt unnatural to me that he would agree with the concept of 'Will if Fire' without first questioning what this concept really means / how it could be exploited. I hope this story will be continued (no updates for 2 years) or rewritten (if so pls let us know autor-san) as it is really unique.

Well, what can I say: This is the first review I ever wrote, so don't expect anything overly great or meaningful. I really enjoyed reading this story (binged it in less than 24h), the world felt familiar yet different (I watched only ATLA, so I have no idea how accurate some LoK knowledge was/is, but I assume it to be pretty on point) the new characters were unique and entertaining and the changes to the timeline/story seamed logical and consequent. Some time into the story, I had a pretty clear expectation how the story would end (because I saw the name of the last chapter), but my expectations where wrong in a way that kinda brought this story to a satisfying end, while there is still more than enough room to write a sequel that picks up where this story ended. All in all, I recommend reading this story (the same is true for all stories of the author I read, but this is the first I finished) or at least the first few chapters to see wether the story catches you.