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ch 18 Chapter 18: Half-Orc And Manticore
Fantasy 路 Duke_Asmodeus
But why did he cultivate for 16 years then? Did he just sit in a cave for 14 yeara doing nothing? That seems weirder to me. Originalmy I thought this rule was specifically for humans, which is why I wrote the comment in the first place.
ch 51 EverGreen Region and The World
Fantasy 路 StumblingtoSuccess
Seriously. Cultivating for 16 years to not get 1 major realm stronger? I wonder if you made a big mistake early, or if this book is gonna timeskip 50 and 100 years at a time soon to make up for this Seems kinda dumb to me. These are important things to think through.
ch 51 EverGreen Region and The World
Fantasy 路 StumblingtoSuccess
Good. But I really hope you think about the power scaling here. Max seemed weak compared to these kids when you think about how long he have trained. This will become a boring series if max isnt much stronger than Ana, and it doesnt look like it is going in this direction. No direct criticism. Just something to think about.
ch 43 Fighting the Corruptor
Fantasy 路 StumblingtoSuccess
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ch 0 1 The Beginning
Fantasy 路 Unorthadox01
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 1 The Beginning
Fantasy 路 Unorthadox01
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy 路 Pointbreak
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ch 0 1 Servant Vaan
Fantasy 路 Pointbreak
Tournament lets goo!!!
ch 1670 Tournament On The Horizon
Eastern 路 Grand_Void_Daoist
I need more chapters! So good!
ch 2009 The Spring Speaks
Walker Of The Worlds
Eastern 路 Grand_Void_Daoist