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A good story being told, that's what I found here, keep it up writer and don't get attached to the small negative criticisms.

This work is very good, well written, engaging plot, captivating characters, so enjoyable to discover a different path to the original story. Congratulations to the Author.

A fanfic that no one asked for, no one thought they needed, until I started reading and found a very good story... excellent, I hope it continues for a long time, perhaps going to other universes.

A very good work, interesting plot that evolves pleasantly, I hope it continues for a long time. Congratulations. A very good work, interesting plot that evolves pleasantly, I hope it continues for a long time. Congratulations.

Very good, that's all I can say. This is without a doubt the first fic with a senju that is really well done, in addition to the way the harem is constructed it is very well done and acceptable, not simply a bunch of meaningless nonsense. Congratulations, please continue.

Siblings Katara and Sokka wake young Aang from a long hibernation and discover that he is an Avatar, with powers that can defeat the Fire Nation.

a forced story at many points. It even makes you want to read it at the beginning but as you progress the need to swallow the script is very forced... nonsense things, facilities, absurdities and "magic powers" are the last trick to bury the plot.

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Excellent is all I have to say about this story, which so far has been written in a sublime way, giving details and adding to the original work in an incredible way, it is not just more of the same as always, but a much more detailed vision and immersive. Congratulations to the author, I hope he has the strength to continue writing and developing this great Dragon Ball universe... Congratulations!!!