Wow.. really cool.. I think there are some things you should edit but in the end the story is really good ... Just continue with this creativity ...
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That what I want Hehe JoJo is the best 馃 Don't stop writing Don't stop writing Don't stop writing Don't stop writing Don't stop writing
Anime & Comics 路 Gamal_3_3_
Although the chapters are short But it's a good story and I really liked it I'm excited about what will happen in the next chapters ............
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ch 0 1 A new beginning
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ch 0 1 An urgent task
Fantasy 路 Gamal_3_3_
Very good 馃槍馃槍 I loved it so much just complet writing this book And i love the hero 馃槏 It will be good novel with alot of chapters 馃き馃き馃き馃き馃き馃き馃き馃き
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Wow.. really cool.. I think there are some things you should edit but in the end the story is really good ... Just continue with this creativity ...