The whole structure of the story is so far great. The characters are conveyed in a way that it actually feels like they have importance in the story rather than making them like some sort of mannequin for the MC to plough through. Like the way Main Character is introduced. Not as some overpowered one but as a prodigy who fell into laziness.
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The whole structure of the story is so far great. The characters are conveyed in a way that it actually feels like they have importance in the story rather than making them like some sort of mannequin for the MC to plough through. Like the way Main Character is introduced. Not as some overpowered one but as a prodigy who fell into laziness.
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Fantasy · Eternal_Ruler_