Caron_Waldman

11mth

Commented

you can amend the word 'beautifuler' to just 'beautiful'

His hair which was black turned white with it's length longer than it was as black, his body became more slender than it was making Yue and the Lu's stunned at what they were witnessing. YanZhi and Xiao Ling broke the kiss as Xiao Ling was out of breath with each of them still looking at each other not breaking away, Xiao Ling was a bit stunned to see his face whiter than it was at first almost seeming pale, he was with the real YanZhi's look but it was a bit different as he looked more beautifuler and his pupils were changing from color to color not staying in one color... Xiao Ling slowly raised his hand up and touched his face which was tender and softer.