SnowManLaughs - Profile

So I must say out of the chapters I've read (27) it's pretty fast paced but super interesting as the story is constantly moving forward. The main character is cold but also human at the same time, you can tell from just the writing that the author is conscious of the grammar and word choice and avoids repeating the same word keeping the writing refreshed. The action is definetly the best par of the novel so if you like action this is definitely up your alley

The writing is a bit weirdly worded and put together, same goes for the dialogue which is blocky and is a bit rough, but the story is interesting if a bit rushed. The world seems to have a lot of unexplored areas that are hinted at. Characters are decent and have some of their quirks but a bit stale overall, and the female characters aren't particularly interesting. Honestly I would've dropped this if it weren't for the quality difference between the first and most recent chapters, where it is noticeable that the author is improving and also the author updates daily which is a plus. Overall not amazing like something you'd read for entertainment on the weekend but something you'd read if you were bored its more of a munchkin novel, maybe it gets better IDK maybe I'll update this depending upon either way its a decent novel though rocky in the beginning