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This novel is the classic example of Novel going wrong after a promising start. This novel's first 80 chapters were almost identical from Mediterranean hegemony of Ancient Greece, after that Author in trying to be different from that classic amazing novel (btw do read MHAG best Kingdom building novel ) inserted lot of useless Harem and sex elements which took the focus away from story and world building. Also why use the word shiva temple in the novel which hurts sentiments of people. A BIG let down by the author.

I really liked the other 2 novels written by the author but I don't know why but this novel has sort of been a let down... in the starting only I don't understand how the character Nepolean gets admission in the military academy also how can his parents let him travel alone so far to Paris when he is not even 14-15. I don't think it was normal for kids to travel that far alone at that time period as it was very unsafe. Also the way he introduces technology is way too fast, besides before MC transmigrated he was not brilliant in wars and even though he knows history how can you show him win every battle? That's too much of smooth sailing without much of a struggle. It's like he can't do no wrong in the world, he is not god nor has super powers so why does he always gets what he wants?

I like reading Kingdom building novels and when this novel started I thought this was one of the best KB novels on web novel but recent chapters has been a huge let down. reading till chapter 350, the MC comes from a modern world yet has not shown any progress when handling diplomacy. I mean the way author has shown how diplomacy is handled by Riz or Rythium kingdom is very basic, even having a minister and ministry to handle external affairs they have not shown professionalism or handled things properly post war. Also why has author neglected the Spy network when crucial information about war and certain things have not been passed back to kingdom, the Inver issue was handled badly. Also the way war was won by being lucky is kinda let down. Hopefully author improves these things ( read other kingdom building novels if you have to).

copied from Mediterranean hegemony of Ancient Greece **

This novel has or had so much potential but lately it's sort of going down the drain. The starting of the novel and the world setting is almost a copy of Hegemony of Mediterranean road,but that novel was much better cause that novel didn't have excessive sex scenes which seemed forced right now. Author seems to be less interested in governing or kingdom building and more on sex. Also why is there a temple of Shiva and not a mosque of Allah or Church of Jesus? if you want to use a religious building then use something which is completely fictional. I am thinking o f dropping this novel if things don't improve. I can suggest Author to read more novels on kingdom building with no harem as Harem doesn't really help in story progress.

why did Minos not kill Carline families Level 59 leaders. Also that whole Brooke thing was not needed as it didnt help in story development and that character just disappeared later. I mean how is all that relevant to story development?

i really like this novel and i read it as soon as it updates but there are some things which i don't understand. Author can you please explain although there is a Harem tag but don't you think that you are showing more of a sex as a tool for MC getting something from a females. also why did Minos not kill Carline family? I mean instead of showing how he had sex with Kara and his mother he could have easily killed the king like he didn't with the other royal family. I don't understand the thought behind as the goal of the MC is to end war as fast as possible. or He could have kidnapped Kara and his mother. Besides what was was need for MC to get into bed with Ruth's sister or some other females in Grey sect as it doesn't help in story development. Harem tag is fine but don't you think it should help in character development and story development. All this just shows that MC is not very mature or logical at times and he sometimes thinks of getting laid.

but will there be any kingdom building? atleast in your discription you said there will be. I just want to know how long would I have to wait to get to that part. I read the discription about Kingdom building and hence started this novel .

hello Author,I want to know where is Kingdom building here? I mean it's already more than 200 chapters. I just want to ask cause I started this novel due to Kingdom building tag. if it will take 500-600 chapters to even get to a decent Kingdom Building level as right now not even guild of the MC has been formed then please remove that tag as it can be misleading.

I hope someone removes Kingdom building tag from the novel though

I picked up this novel for one reason and that was Kingdom building tag. I have read over 100+ chapters and I am yet to see any type of Kingdom building initiative done by the MC. I understand that it takes time but this novel seems like more of an action adventure revenge novel where MC does levelling up and cultivation inside a to get stronger to get revenge. the overall writing is not bad but I feel that every 5 chapters there is some new skill while we don't even get to understand more about existing skills. World building can be bit confusing at times due to lack of clarity. I am thinking of dropping this novel as it doesn't seem like there will be any Kingdom building done in next 500-600 chapters as the MC has yet to even start making a guild. His past trauma is making him hesitant to form new friendships and he seems adamant to do everything on his own. Of course that might change in future with character development but as of now this novel isn't about Kingdom building but more of a journey of a guy who is seeking vengeance and revenge while doing self harm in the process just to achieve the end result. Please remove the Kingdom building tag so others like me who wanted to read a decent Kingdom Building novel don't get mislead.