very interesting. the description of the lady at the front desk was quite amusing... I am thinking there is more to her, meaning she may become an important character later on... also the conversation with Mr. Hayes and Soraya was good except for the assumption that she was the only candidate. I think that part could have been handled a little better, because Mr. Hayes should have been smart enough not to give her the upper hand in that regards as some companies do deal with candidates one at a time, he could have played that card. But then again he may be preoccupied with his reports therefore his lackadaisical attitude
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very interesting. the description of the lady at the front desk was quite amusing... I am thinking there is more to her, meaning she may become an important character later on... also the conversation with Mr. Hayes and Soraya was good except for the assumption that she was the only candidate. I think that part could have been handled a little better, because Mr. Hayes should have been smart enough not to give her the upper hand in that regards as some companies do deal with candidates one at a time, he could have played that card. But then again he may be preoccupied with his reports therefore his lackadaisical attitude
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