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There is alot of mistakes throughout the story, things like this I miss a lot as after a certain progress into the story, I generally stop rechecking or miss it entirely even after several rereads
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It is not a question on why wouldn't I know, it's the about the concept of a different tradition. Kinda like if a husband in RL offered his wife a crowbar instead of a wedding ring, They know what it is, but does it make sense as a whole to those looking at it from afar. Is it violent?, is it peace? does it stem from the fact a kunai is actually a tent peg instead of a weapon in RL
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Gotta make use of your entire arsenal, as long as it gets the job done.
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I had things that happened in RL so I story-dumped alot of my drafts at that point for the readers at the time, you will notice that my spelling gets a little worse from this point until the second arc (albeit my spelling and grammar is already bad )
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It might, but the moment has to be special like a hero.
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I have moved the chapters to the fanfiction section under the same name, check my profile to find it directly.
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Check my profile and find the same title but in the fanfiction section, the chapters are already in progress
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Naruto didn't care for his father and most of his techniques
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Bit of persistence full of copy and pasting, mind went numb after a while. I'll do my best to persist.
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I stopped today on the other locations postings, I transferred everything today too, there should be an extra chapter on this section as I am still writing my story.
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I just moved the story into Fanfic, I will be updating chapters there now if you want to continue reading
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It starts off a little before Shippuden, but the story after a few chapters officially moves into Shippuden.
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The option is apparently removed after the story is make, I would have to delete everything and reprint it in the fanfic section
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You need strength to be able to do whatever you want, as it stands he has no strength and is considered a hated cannon fodder atm so he has to grit his teeth heavily. The story doesn't base itself on a miracle system that sends him to be OP from the start, this story works closer to a journey of finding opportunities. That is not to say he has no personal strength that came with him, but it can't win battles as it stands.
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Not to scale, only meant to give a really rough idea of direction