Heem_Dog - Profile

At first glance, it was pretty good book with a well - written sypnosis and first few chapters. After chapter 3, the writing quality turned into shit. I had to double the necessary brain cells needed to process what I was reading because the grammar and the writing quality were so bad. However on other aspects such as update stability and world background, they were pretty solid.

My final rating of this book is 4.2. The book itself is very well crafted, with good grammar. However they're parts of the novel which are a bit questionable. One of my most favorite aspects of the book is the world background. The framework is different from most books on this platform and I find the ideas of blessing, archons and dust very intruiging.

After reading up to Ch27, here's my review. Writing quality is solid. While the stability of updates is good. It seems 1 ch per day. The world background is the most intriguing. True, the superheroes novel type is all over the platform, but what stands out is the mc's character background. Will the mc break away from his destiny?? Or he will continue to trek on this path, I find it too early to figure out?

Rating is a 3.8. The writing quality is decent however, it lacks a good deal of description. There is no coloration and it simply lacks immersiveness that makes a book great. Stability of updates is a 5. Story Development is alright. There are incredibly pivotal moments throughout the book and they're all reasonably spread out. The pace overall is not too fast, yet not too slow. Character Design is pretty mid. All of the characters are to some degree weird. The main character is clearly a psychopath and his sister is into incest. We also characters are enjoy being raped. I'm very glad for the author's decision to add at least one average - joe to even out all the goofiness. World Background is your standard world background-- simply reality.

A solid 4.4. It is a solid pick though with a strong characters and good / stable updates. There are as many has already mentioned. Cliche aspects of the book, but there also unique ones too.

Writing Quality wise, it's a solid 4 stars. There are some grammar mistakes, though it doesn't really disrupt the flow of the plot. Stability of Updates, so far so good. Story Development is good. The problem I have is the background dumping. The author dumps massive loads of information into a single chapter-- most of the time it's relevant, other times it's not. This could be a personal preference of mine but I do find it hard to keep track of all the names, including all of the NPCS. Though, the plot is definitely moving at a reasonable pace. The character design and world background are pretty solid. Though there are some cliche aspects to the characters they all have interesting backgrounds.