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I like the novel, it's a nice story. But at times, the story just feels off-putting. The holy power that made Kye's friends like him was nice but it felt too awfully convenient. The other friend's reactions were weird and felt forced and Ven's feelings regarding the reveal of Kye's Holy Energy's Influence is unexplained. "Why did Ven feel that way?" was a question I had in my mind for a while and I thought that could have been a good chance to add character depth to him other than being an "angry, overprotective brother" type. The random events like meeting with Ari and Rias (I hope I spelt it right) felt weird since it wasn't explained too much but it wasn't that much of a problem. Kye's attitude in the earlier chapters were good, I liked his development of being a weak and frail student to a more confident one yet still somewhat weak. The Kye in the later half though is very... arrogant? Too overconfident and liked pissing off a lot of superior beings for some reason and starts avoiding them for no valid reason. His behavior towards Angel's and Demon's and Even Archangels like Michael and Uriel was arrogant even when he is extremely weak compared to them, that it started to annoy me because of his idiocy. He says its because he can't trust anyone but thats just hypocritical. He trusted and gave second chances to Rias and Ari and his other friends because of his eyes that could see the truth, but he wont even give Angels, LITERAL ANGELS, a chance to prove that they dont mean any harm. -- Thats all I wanna say about the characters, theres not really a lot. But, I wanted to say that even though the writing quality isnt that great and there were a LOT of confusing parts, it was still entertaining. Which is the only reason I read till the latest update, though it has been quite slow. The story and writing is okay but nothing more. It isnt bad though.

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Alright! I made this account to just post my personal view and opinion so you might have different thoughts from mine and that's fine! So try reading it first! Review: Ever since Ezio was kidnapped and we no longer see most of the thing's on his perspective.... Everything went bland. Most probably because after Ezio disappeared, the "MC" took over and we are now watching things on his POV. I don't have problems with Overlords or Demon King's MC, Cold MC's or anything of the same type... but wow he is so empty, bland. Ezio, his character was developed and he atleast felt "human", feeling angry when they attacked his Uncle, feeling sadness from the death of his Uncle which was his only family, and feeling fear when encountering (whatever his name was). He felt developed and he had a story we "saw" but in contrast to (whatever his name was) the "MC" he feels empty, bland, annoying, and that's all there is to him. Of course, he has this whole backstory of just being treated like a monster even though he was human and that he was qoute on qoute "framed", and that he wants to live a normal life. Yet, what he does is quicken the problem that are gonna happen and that affects his normal life too, he doesn't put effort into acting like a human and referring others as "humans" like he himself is not, he didn't even try to save his "toy" Ezio and let him be kidnapped. He always complains and complains it's annoying to read. In short, MC is a human who lost his humanity, an empty character, and an annoying one. At least the writing quality is fine and the chapters are free.

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