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So far, I like the story. While your writing style is a bit simplistic, you do a well done job conveying the characters thoughts and emotions. There was some things that could use rewording (Opening paragraph and Yuno’s friendship with Sora for examples) but other than that, I look forward to future chapters 👍🏾👍🏾
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So far, I like the story. While your writing style is a bit simplistic, you do a well done job conveying the characters thoughts and emotions. There was some things that could use rewording (Opening paragraph and Yuno’s friendship with Sora for examples) but other than that, I look forward to future chapters 👍🏾👍🏾
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Prologue
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