A well-written chapter. Interesting and good grammar. I absolutely love it.
ch 0 1 I Have A Dream
Urban · KayLee
My reaction after reading the revised first chapter
ch 0 1 What Is Your Dream?
Urban · KayLee
You're welcome. It's good to see you enjoy it.
ch 0 1 Our First Encounter
Fantasy · KayLee
ch 0 1 Tyler And The Bartender I
Fantasy · KayLee
Great action from Tyler. Seems like Tom is making some new friends.
ch 0 1 Tyler And The Bartender I
Fantasy · KayLee
Audrey is really suffering and Tyler should be careful.
ch 0 1 JAM Unites
Fantasy · KayLee
Elliott is the brain behind it all
ch 0 1 Room Service
Fantasy · KayLee
These guys are true opportunists
ch 0 1 Room Service
Fantasy · KayLee
Amazing writing. Interesting scene from Harvey
ch 0 1 I Don't Remember
Fantasy · KayLee
Something big is coming. I can feel it.
ch 0 1 What if?
Fantasy · KayLee
Hope you never find one, Brad.
He then got up and made it for the door. But before he could slide the door open, he tells Audrey: "Hope you find a better man who will make you happy."
Fantasy · KayLee
"Yes, I knew everything. That's why I wanted to get the divorce quickly. So you could be free and start anew, just as you wanted. That way, I would gain my peace of mind and you would also gain your freedom", Audrey replies.
Fantasy · KayLee
"What a jerk you are!" Officer Tyler interrupts. Everyone agreed with him and Brad surely knew that.
Fantasy · KayLee
"I mean, you could have chosen not to marry her. No one forced you to say 'I do' on the wedding day. Hence, you had to perform your role as a husband, but you didn't. I don't think signing those papers ends it all. She deserves a well-rounded apology", Harvey explains.
Fantasy · KayLee
"What? Are you saying that I should get on my knees and say I'm sorry? Why the hell should I do that?" Brad asks notoriously.
Fantasy · KayLee
This chapter is just too touching. Couldn't help but shed some tears. Love how it was written in the first POV. The feelings were brought alive without being overly dramatic. Good job author
ch 0 1 Rain
Beauty In The Rain
Fantasy · KayLee