I like your story but you need to improve your grammar, you need to use more periods.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 Divine Kingdom
Fantasy · Misifus_7w7
It's a unique story and it's overall pretty good.
Fantasy · AnonymUser
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I like your story but you need to improve your grammar, you need to use more periods.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 Divine Kingdom
Reincarnated as The Elf God
Fantasy · Misifus_7w7