Great_Disaster

11mth

Commented

Mage needed magic, in other words, mana to use spells. His Rewriting Fate needs Mana go function.

[Low Tier Role - Mage.]

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Fantasy · Lagaru

Great_Disaster

11mth

Posted

Shameless review. You're one of my favorites Author's.

Fate/Hollow

Book&Literature · Godfire_Dragneel

Great_Disaster

1yr

Posted

I give you 4.8 stars. the story is good. well structured and has a sense of rhythm. I liked how you portrait Artemis, although we only had one chapter of him, he gives me the Aura of a strict wise old man. the character of Icarus is not well known among the writing community, I gotta congratulate you for having the Nevers of steel to write him. looking forward to new chapters. after all this is - 👇

Fate: The First King

Fantasy · Godfire_Dragneel

Great_Disaster

1yr

Commented

not Mysterious at all 😂😂☠️

Gods, humans, anything walk upon her physically body and had a gull to look down on her. She clicked her tongue, she is going to show them 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐢𝐬. And like that she dissapeared in a furry of Flower petal and dissapeared from the world foever, 𝙊𝙧 𝙨𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙖𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝𝙩.