The_stranger_imp

I am not a big fan of the part where he talks to the imaginary readers but as long as its not over used it can be good. Also i like how poe challenges the vikings idea of revenge

ch 18 Chapter 17

Rewriting A Tragedy

Fantasy · Monsource

The_stranger_imp

2mth

Commented

I really like how it shows his sense of alienation that he feels from being in a different world and a different body. The way you describe him makes him seem so real.

ch 17 Chapter 16

Rewriting A Tragedy

Fantasy · Monsource

The_stranger_imp

2mth

Posted

I really enjoyed the story but i hope you will come back

The Extra's Odyssey

Fantasy · Ryukurou

The_stranger_imp

2mth

Commented

I really like how it shows his internal crisis

ch 13 Chapter 12

Rewriting A Tragedy

Fantasy · Monsource

The_stranger_imp

2mth

Commented

This entire chapter is gold it brings a broader perspective on the transmigration narrative. And i like that someone in the novel is able to know that he is being controlled by something higher.

ch 10 Chapter 9

Rewriting A Tragedy

Fantasy · Monsource

The_stranger_imp

3mth

Posted

So far the story has good potential the only gripe i have is that how would a knight that is trained to protect and kill if needed be scared of a vampire child

Rewriting A Tragedy

Fantasy · Monsource

The_stranger_imp

10mth

Commented

Honestly great execution it was short but you can really see the emotion

Alen let go of her sister's hand causing him to be pulled into the light after he closed the mysterious drawings in the sky the light vanished. Without any force holding her up Tanya fell to the ground at the edge of a circular scorch mark on the ground. Her arm was bleeding as all the skin had been burned off, but that didn't seem to be her concern at all as she looked up at the sky tears fell from her face, and she let out a heartbreaking cry.