Surendra_Jajra - Profile

overall ok but in starting i was confused as author was making connections to another novel but it is ok at this point as later i understood the flow but the author is focusing too much on a single side character to wa zi( mc is now only mentioned in the passing only when he needs his protection only) I think it is because he thinks he( to wa zi) is funny or something but it is not and because of that I am dropping this novel here

it is a good novel and I like it very much but the length of ur chapters is decreasing as story goes on(the last chapter was only worth 7 coins and after the discount it was only 5 coins and it is hard to spend on them) so if possible don't make chapters soo short and add it to the chapters before or after it

Are you sure it's not a real world and you are not telling a story you saw in another world... I most liked the versatile changes that happen and can't predict the changes that happen.... you know after reading a lot of novels I always thought that that I can see who loves whom, who will get opportunities blah blah.... but after reading this I don't know shit what is going to happen... and my final message to author is to work hard in writing more but most importantly don't drop the quality work for quantity 👍👍👍

Don' t waste your time on this as after chapter 201 the whole is changed and doesn't match up with chapter 202 as an era or 2 has passed and it is not fixed even after more than a month is passed 😞...... so check before start reading if this is fixed or not and don't waste your time on this

yeah I read in chapter 6 or 7 that MC mistakes bra for an eye mask....and author tries to make it funny by making flat chest joke.....this is totally bullshit..,. may be MC is not on the bright side but he can't be that stupid even after his friend share him those type of videos on regular basis..... I have read now until chapter 8 , so I want to ask if this shit is going to continue in future or author has improvised it.... if not I am dropping it here and read another novel