Zachary_Comodore - Profile

this was perfect truly thank you the beginning was setting up everything perfectly the ending was just perfect it was amazing even got me a little emotional[img=update][img=update][img=update]

this is really good to me I love how you explained it it wasn't too complicated simple enough for me to understand and I enjoyed the adventure and like how you add the present to the past thank you and waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update]

Amazing Star off smooth but then it went dark I can't wait to see what you do next thank you come back more chapter tomorrow

I like the way it is now but you want to do something different that's okay too I'm just hoping I get more chapters appreciate all your hard work

no need to rush take your time and I enjoy your work[img=update][img=update][img=update]

this is great we like the chapter so far it is 8 out of 10 can't wait to see what's going to be like in a few more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update]

that was great need more chapters👍👍❤️❤️

this was interesting need more

will we get a backstory about his brother

I've been waiting for this thank the Lord thank the person that wrote who put it up I appreciate it and this this right here which is beautiful it came in hard and strong and they left on a strong Temple you just know that something good is going to be coming soon

do anybody knows any more chapters coming if you do can you tell me and I thank you for hear me out[img=update]

this is pretty good little dark but it was still good it just goes to show how certain things play out

thank you so much for the chapters I really do appreciate it you really made a grown man cry do you know how hard it is to find a good book like I really do appreciate it if I had money I will send you some I'm not joking truly thank you[img=update][img=update][img=update]😭😭😭😭

oh my thank the Lord thank the Lord for the chapter and think the person who updated wrote it took the time to do his thing he or she I've been waiting for this I've been waiting for this I thought he got dropped I'm glad that is back[img=update][img=update]

I need more chapters man I need more chapters🥺🥺🙏🙏

yes please I enjoyed this book very much I wish for more I've been waiting for a while and I appreciate it for more chapters🙏🙏😭😭👍👍👍😃😃😃❤️[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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👍👍👍😭😭😭🥺🥺 need more chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭

this was really great thank you for the chapters need more