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Such a scam

This is so stupid. The kids only 2 and the first thing you do when you see a kid with powers like that is not to treat them like an adult. Maybe be more excited and treat him as a genius. Aura gives off intent. The girls not psychic. Why are you making it so that the girl finds it so fishy. Thats a 2 yr old kid.

Ehh youre just forcing situations to MC everytime he gets out of the tower. Convos are also dry and feels like talking to a robot.

Thanks for the chap. Mc's reflection there about his mistakes was good too. Ughh yeah I hope you dont go trying to be a hero all of a sudden mc.

Author I hope this isnt some last ditch effort just to get stones or something like what you did with your other novel the lazy new life. You promised to revamp that one and 3 months later, still nothing. Gonna be disappointing tho this was a real good fanfic.

Eh the little rock types a bad pick considering war when its heavy. Zubat for a crobat wouldve been better. Good for scouting, detection and assassination.

Poor ekans :< not fond of ekans for a starter but this pokedeath here is dark and depressing.

Are you dumb or something? It wouldnt mean anything anyway. Its not like rockets are city local gangsters that Herbert could do a thing anyway. Whatd he do? Act cautiously than instead of helping, will make him a more primary target? Idk even how dark this fanfic is at this point, so isnt it all fine?

Author feels insufferably smug imagining himself the MC then banging the harem.

Yesss its back.

Thats pretty convenient for an excuse. And it would probably be the reason too. It wasnt explained much how his fairy typing affected him so its still great hypothesis. Yeah and im just maybe lil low and disappointed, i expected much from mc because he knows more and capable. Knows the future too. I thought hed be flipping the table here.

Ah right, the guy who was mature for his age and could probably be judged to be more than a prodigy compared to his peers did something. I could say it was a mistake one after another. From infiltration to overestimating himself to that mistake he couldnt even find out. Right. He didnt even do a single thing against galactic in those 15 years. No precautions much. Not even tipping others bout them. Its not like you could fault him tho. But doing something reckless like that not even months after going on a journey, seems pretty outside of his personality to me. Ive always hated the hero trope, but if you wanted to do something why not do it sooner when youve got the advantage of intelligence? Anywayss great chap

Yeah just surprised where I thought it was going. He had cool starters after all and now he looks like picking just any pokemon that comes near him hahah