Lord_Morpheus

1mth

Posted

im enjoying it so far, nothing to complain about! keep up the good work author :) ... apparently these reviews have a minimum letter requirement so im going to ramble on a little with fancy words and cascading turns of frase. did you know that when the opportunity rover went offline the last message they sent it was a song?

Harry Potter: The Heir to Hufflepuff

Book&Literature · Pequin

Lord_Morpheus

5mth

Commented

Heyy nice to see a new chapter to this story! Looking forward to seeing what Marceline gets up to in the mortal world.

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Im Marceline from Adventure Time?

Anime & Comics · GaZe_Zero

Lord_Morpheus

6mth

Commented

The main character getting some miles of their soul before they meet the main cast, we love to see it. Nice to see that the MC was living a full/interesting life building his kingdom rather than just being unchanging while they wait for cannon to start.

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[Adventure Time: The Fifth Elemental]

Others · Lox_Of_Sins

Lord_Morpheus

6mth

Replied to Lox_Of_Sins

In that case, good job. I guess the confusion came from me not knowing if what i was picking up was intentional or not. Nice to hear that their going to grow and change as time moves forward.

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[Adventure Time: The Fifth Elemental]

Others · Lox_Of_Sins

Lord_Morpheus

6mth

Commented

I love adventure time as a setting, im definitely going to be reading this for as long as you keep ot going :) If i had to offer criticism, im having a hard time getting a read on the main characters personality to be honest. He's kinda coming off as goofy but in a childish way rather than it being a joke or a choice? I don't know if that's what you were going for or not.

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[Adventure Time: The Fifth Elemental]

Others · Lox_Of_Sins

Lord_Morpheus

7mth

Commented

Thanks for the new story! I always love your stuff. Adventure Time doesn't have enough good fics for how awesome the source material is so its nice to see something promising and Marceline is one of my favorite characters to boot!

ch 0 2 The man who wears a dark suit and Tie