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Thanks. fixing that ASAP
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Fantasy · Elkannah
the only time I used third was during the Queen/ maid scene
I could only stare with my eyes widened in fear and horror, as the five men in red cloaks and hoods circled a sealed crypt with a weird symbol on the top, murmuring and chanting words I had never heard before and they weren't even witches!
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Fantasy · Elkannah
That's first POV and not third. Third is when the writer is telling the story about the characters like; Ambrose said. ..
I could only stare with my eyes widened in fear and horror, as the five men in red cloaks and hoods circled a sealed crypt with a weird symbol on the top, murmuring and chanting words I had never heard before and they weren't even witches!
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Fantasy · Elkannah
',shaky' is a cliched word. So I rather not fill my novel.
my trembling hands took up the pen on the sink, writing out what seemed like a letter. My handwriting was shaky, and my penmanship was not great, but I managed to finish it nonetheless.
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Fantasy · Elkannah