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Chapter 234 and I dropped. I don't remember who said this novel is not a cliché, but I sincerely curse him. Mc always fights against stronger opponents and wins. In conversations and thought process he is a complete idiot. Just like the proud Chinese novel pratogs, he is honest and doesn't lie (only sometimes he doesn't speak, instead of lying, and other idiots believe what they make up in their heads. JUST cliché). He is not even a little bit cunning, his supposed cunning and intelligence is determined by the low IQ NPCs created by the author. But despite all this, this is not the reason why I dropped the novel, it's the cultivation realms nonsense created by the author. His wife, who started cultivating with him on the same level as him after they left inheritince together, still was on the same level as him in chapter 234! Some people might say what's the big deal, so let me explain: Mc has a heavenly treasure that purifies Qi and increases his cultivation speed, he is an alchemist, he has an ungraded technique for his cultivation - Monarch Eternal Body (his wife's is only Saint-LowGrade) and he has a cultivation treasure that speeds up the world around him by 10 times compared to the outside - Stone of time. In short, they started cultivating at similar levels and now they are both at the same level. What took Mc months to breakthrough the realm, his wife breakthrough it in 10 days! Reason? - None! The only thing that makes her such a cultivating machine instead of the Mc is that the Author want to be her that way. I mean, it's so obvious that he keeps giving her pointless power-ups, supposedly to avoid making her a vase. Sometimes even he forgets to write down the reason. I mean, I can't understand how he can breakthrough realms the here and climb the cultivation realms like climbing a ladder. Mc uses the same pills she uses, his cultivation time is way more than her and he has the treasure/techniques I wrote above, but he's still on the same fking level as her!!! The only difference in cultivation may be the difference in quality. But that doesn't make any sense to me either! Every time Mc's cultivation level rises, so does the level of the opponent he can fight against. And us, as a reader, we wait for action and try to figure out what the limit him is this time. If the d♡♡n cultivation realms don't work for him and even a regular guy can catch him after a while, why did you put him there as a cultivator! If you had just put Super-Man, we would have read it. Because according to the cultivation system of the world, his fighting prowess is no fun at all!!! He's always fighting stronger opponents. That's why he's cautious at first, then he wins after hard process. I was so bored while I was reading that even dropped novel because his wife on the same level with him for no reason and no logic, and this made me realize how pointless his cultivation speed/talent was and I fall the novel down. Next time, if the author is going to write a cultivation novel, he should first give his characters some brains. Then give his Mc and the other living characters a sensible cultivating system. Let them not randomly achieve the success that Mc has achieved through his ordeal for no reason.

You're just polluting the webnovel with this garbage fiction. Your constant deletion of comments will not stop people from pointing out how garbage your fiction and writing is. Just accept it and put a warning somewhere next time if you are going to write cuckold Mc!

The synopsis of this novel is this: I'm an Asgardian beta cuck and I don't mind sharing my lover just so I can fk others. .. .. Warning: Yuri NTR

Well, that's fair. But like I said, this novel was boring for me and that's why I didn't read many chapters. And the part that I did read, it didn't mention that it was more of a family, so... Yeah, I didn't find that very entertaining. In fact, he still thought it was just a stupid dream. In short, in his dream he was enjoying himself and playing sergeant. That's what you do when you have a chance to realize that you are in a dream, isn't it? In short, what he was doing was having fun in his dream... You know, for someone who is a leafling in this cruel and 'real' world, it doesn't give them much time to train someone else... Actually I could go with it if he used them for a while to survive, but as I said, the other way around is not for me. And if there are others who are not, they will see this comment and judge accordingly. In addition, I didn't disrespect the labor here and give 1 star. I hope some of you understand that some things don't appeal to others...

WARNING : Throughout the story, from the hero and heroine to the supporting characters, the MC strives to make sure they all have a better life. Reason - None! Thinking about your own life - None! The hero will already have a good life after a few hardships, why are you trying to be the unsung hero by protecting him from the shadows!!?!? In short, this novel garbage! It's about an idiot who licks the hero's boot after immigrating and pretends to be a villain to supposedly survive. Doesn't the brainless idiot realize that if he still acts like a villain he might be harmed by it in the future ? Also why protect the protagonist/heroins just to keep the plot in place. Mc has no reason here to immediately make huge sacrifices for the characters of a game he just immigrated to! The author of this novel is a spineless writer who deleted reviews just because he think : 'It didn't reflect his book properly.' Yes, you can cry, because I would rather not read your book than the one I found in the trash-can. You don't have to whine because people are telling the hard truth.

3 chapter and fall. This novel doesn't even deserve to be called trash. A loser with hero syndrome and looking for a thrilling death saves a b♡♡ch who is not even grateful to him in exchange for his life. The way he's treated afterward is a boytoy. I don't know what idiot with a strange woman fetish wrote this novel but... What I see is that you gave a 'cheat' someone in the sh♡tt♡st way of any novel I've ever read. Even what he got was take to look like he begged for it and there's this illusion that he doesn't deserve it at all. No matter how much power he gets, he's just a female playtoy who gets power by licking the bottom of someone's shoe!