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Okay the grammer in some places needs some touching up because it's not just a wrong letter, no it's just gibberish and especially on some places its an entirely wrong word and just messes a lot up. the Mc is good and amazing at the beginning but then it's like the author got bored and tried to rewrite him but make it seem like it was he Mc's actions changing cause reasons so 20+ chapters in, it gets bad quickly. also the random chapters thrown in between are horrible it goes from a battle to him, 6 days before walking around town, back to the battle. It is just so jagged and really breaks the immersion. the plot is everywhere and in shambles, the author just gets every bad guy gives them assassins and sends them after the Mc every 5 chapters and still 60+ chapters in and is still getting targeted, also all his knowledge at the beginning ya useless and you can chuck it out the window for 99.999% of the novel, which is hilarious because it's the god damn theme of this novel is the powers and knowledge but nope useless, also the author must've lost his script because the 200+ old Mc turns randomly into a horny idiotic teenager that literally puts himself in the open and brags about every god damn thing he's done and immediately everyone starts sending assassins after him and all the secrecy from the beginning with his parents trying to keep him and the relic they’re hiding a secret is useless because he’s just waving around saying I’m here by messing around with every major event then saying In public IM THE ONE WHO DID IT so it was fun but this turned into a dumpster fire.

It’s okay he has a unique ability to reverse effects targeting him and thankfully he actually chooses a class that fits his trait and all goes well for 2 chapters then it’s a normal Chinese young master novel like usual, at least it’s not a harem but I’m still dropping this cause I can already see where it’s going with the young master scene, it’s most likely going to have more of it or a “ancient evil sect” bla bla bla it’s scary and bad and wants to kill Mc skip coward to them hunting him constantly to move plot toward then ta-da the end

Amazing start but that’s it cause the author dropped it

Ha nope it helps getting worked up cause I lose track of time but I just get really annoyed at people trying to make characters so selfless or kind when they really never should’ve

Super funny also nice touch of humour the Mc is not a harem or bump into and make out with every female type thankfully but that’s probably what’s bringing down the ratings besides bots and people who only like the blandest of story’s with an mc that has a harem, is stupid and rapes female’s every chance he gets

God damn this is good kinda fast paced and iffy on the abilities and others things, but really good read and giddy with joy to see some xenos burned for heresy.

I was going to write sooooooooo much about how terrible and aggravating this novel is and how unrealistic it is which is hilarious cause it’s a fantasy world and for that to be unrealistic you need to mess up REALLY BAD with character development and plot armour and it does so I’ll point some out -mc is too kind(mother was abused and killed, mc is poor in a terrible area, literally no friends and an orphan) -mc thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows(literally the whole novel is just him in denial about how bad humans are LOL like we already experiment on other humans even without being in a fantasy world that literally makes them into lesser humans cause they’re so weak) -mc has flippin dementia(for some reason the mc will forget basic things like for example, the curse world it has three things the mc learns before going in, 1cursed beasts, 2blessed beasts, 3something for a potion that’s very valuable, and what does the mc think when he sees crowds of people trying to harvest this one flower literally putting there lives on the line for it, here’s the paragraph “if prodigies from larger families and clans were asked to pluck flowers, their worth must be enormous...but I can’t think of and extremely expensive potion one can concoct out of bloody flowers” like you flippin idiot there’s only three things and one potion in that list you moron what else could it be a brain supplement cause if it is you need one. Aaaaaaand that’s it for now I still can’t believe how far i got with veins bulging from my forehead in frustration at how annoying this mc is, like on earth it’s a boring realistic planet with the same environment the mc was born into and in some area’s worse and what do we see there are kids that are smarter and more mature then some adults and smarter like street smarts and then in a fantasy world that evolved around killing and enslaving, and his mother that was abused murdered also he was blind had no friends and was as weak as a chicken he thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows that there is no bad in the world and won’t kill anyone, and will openly tell people that I have very op eyes, and that just cause he hasn’t heard anything about it, it just doesn’t exist like transplanting special traits that when the enemy has almost god like power there is for sure a way to transplant traits and you openly tell them about yours because a disabled orphan with no power in the world hasn’t heard about transplanting traits it doesn’t exist and can’t happen