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Will we have Targaryens being crushed?

Overall, it's a decent read, but there are a few problems. The protagonist is a bit boring and it's tedious as everyone around him tries to sell a manipulative image of him "He's using me", and most of the time the protagonist doesn't do anything special, he's just a normal smart guy. But the most serious problem in history would be its development. For example, there was a chapter where half of it was just the protagonist's friend saying "We are friends" and the protagonist responding "We are not friends", and this goes on for a good part of the chapter, and so on. This same scene happens more frequently to the point of being irritating, in other examples. The pacing isn't exactly perfect either, despite having chapters every day, many of them are just fillers and take place in one place with a single subject. But these problems that I detected do not destroy the story, in my opinion. There is still a lot of potential, and all these problems will be resolved as the author gains experience, something similar happened with Tapov and I will kill the author.

Lol he's definitely going to punish Zack at the beginning hahaha

I really want to see a trio with airi and kikyo.

Not necessarily, I like an indifferent protagonist, but it is also very necessary to have other points of view in the story, since it is the characters that give the work its soul.

Good chapter, the last few chapters have been a bit dragging, but a new point of view was refreshing. I hope Iske isn't sentimental with his family, the best thing to show to someone who abandoned you is indifference.

The story has high potential, the protagonist seems like he won't become a helper to the false protagonist so it's great.

When will the conquest of Westeros begin?

Is it just me, or did you start releasing a bunch of fanfics with a similar theme to this? the guys are copying you straight away.