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Moments 39
come on how many times do you need to explain the shadow
The elemental's arms took shape, elongating into elongated, spindly appendages that almost seemed to extend infinitely. Its fingers, if one could call them that, tapered into needle-like points, giving it an almost skeletal appearance. It seemed poised and ready, exuding an aura of undeniable strength and mystery.
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
yeah it's bad writing one short paragraph to explain her would have been enough not 5
The woman who stood before them was not just a player; she was a force to be reckoned with, a living embodiment of the shadows she so expertly navigated.
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
in an enshrouding shroud ????
A hooded cloak cascaded down her shoulders, its folds concealing much of her upper body in an enshrouding shroud of shadow.
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
how many different ways can you say the same thing ?? 3 paragraphs said pretty much the same thing
This was her chance to explore a high-level dungeon, and her excitement was evident in the newfound light in her eyes.
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
why do you have victor Patrick and vin sitting around talking about the match like they don't know who he is in game ???
ch 102 The Players are Buzzing
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
so why are they talking about it like they don't know who he is in game???
Patrick's eyes sparkled with excitement, his enthusiasm palpable as he leaned forward, his words spilling out in a torrent. "Guys, you won't believe what happened in the latest game update! Snow Angels totally outplayed Doom Serenity. Xiaxia was beyond amazing! She managed to outmaneuver Tristan, and her moves were so cool!"
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
so your saying he won't hear from his father here???? why did you need to add this detail when has his father been in the story? I don't see the need to add this
Their shares would surely plummet and investors would start to question his membership in the guild. Not to mention that he wouldn't hear nonstop about this from his father.
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
how is he dead in this paragraph but still fighting in the next?? sapping away his remaining hp = dead
With precision and calculated skill, Xiaxia's attacks found their mark. Her [Sunblade] delivered decisive blows, its radiant energy sapping away Tristan's remaining HP. His attempts to close the distance were thwarted by her aerial advantage.
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
why have you put massive spacing between your paragraphs now?
ch 75 The World of Eternia
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
seriously how many books have you read that repete the last paragraph from the chapter before in the next chapter it's stupid and it's a waste do better
"Lady Eliza is obviously much more experienced than us in matters like these, and I'm fully aware that she's fully capable of handling everything on her own, and likely much more effectively. However, if I may, I'd like to be a bit selfish and request to come with you. I see this as a great opportunity to learn from someone as knowledgeable as Lady Eliza, and I wouldn't want to miss it."
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
and it don't make sense
Orion approached his fallen son, his voice gentle but firm. "Do you understand what I was talking about before? Do you understand what I was talking about before? You much, you put every ounce of power you have into those punches, however, there is no substance in your punches.
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
he knew he would people!!!! it should just be he knew people
Isolde had prepared himself when he came here, he knew he would people get injured in the battle between mages, but this?
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
you need to stop adding random words in with your sentences
Isolde had prepared himself when he came here, he knew he would people get injured in the battle between mages, but this?
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
come on how was his fist scraped and bloody he never hit anything I so angry I actually had to pay for this
Karl's frustration flared as he got back on his feet, his knuckles scraped and bloodied. He charged at Vaan with a renewed determination, his fists a blur as he unleashed a flurry of punches. Yet, Vaan's movements were like water, effortlessly evading each strike. He danced around Karl, his footwork precise and his reactions lightning-fast.
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
seriously I don't want to read this book because I'm sick of seeing you repete ( no update on Sundays. it's my rest day ) we get it okay ffs
No update on Sundays. It's my rest day 🥱
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels
it's level was more than 10
He clearly remembered that when he had just picked up this Turtle, it was only Level 10.
Login Before Others: Stone Age
Games · Let Me Handle It
couldn't find a name for this chapter so you re-used one? lame
The Turtle’s Ability
Login Before Others: Stone Age
Games · Let Me Handle It
sort out your genders ffs
ch 68 Shen Yi’s Invitation
Login Before Others: Stone Age
Games · Let Me Handle It
pathetic no wonder this book updates once a week
Mysterious Text and a Sudden Crisis!
Live Stream Treasure Hunt: I Made Profits Million Times Over
Urban · Red_Skin_Duck
just saying don't you think it's a bit much to have over 70 chapters dedicated to the dungeon crawl ?
ch 121 You’re so Clueless
MMORPG: I was BUGGED
Games · MiuNovels