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Lovely chapter
ch 43 Magical Girl Sylveon is BACK!
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Video Games · unfortunateGambler
You said to correct grammer so don't get mad but you wrote hair when you almost certainly meant air
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Video Games · unfortunateGambler
Lovely chapter as always. Nice to see what the end of Kevin's rope looks like.
ch 40 Kevin Needs a Break
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Video Games · unfortunateGambler
You accidentally said Team B instead of Team C. I know this is a mistake because you actually use Team C for who they fight
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
You spelled her name wrong here
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
Nice chapter overall! It was good to get some action and I am looking forward to seeing Dante's pov during the exam proper.
ch 18 U.A. Entrance Exam! Part 2.
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
I presume you meant One For All here?
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
If so then by having abilities rely on stanima and having unlimited stanima, he then has unlimited abilities for cheaper amounts of dream energy
"I advise you guys to think carefully. If that can help you, know that I chose to prioritize my stamina. My future fighting style will rely heavily on my multiple abilities, so I will need a big stamina pool, plus, it's not like I will lack raw power with our bodies that will automatically get stronger, so I rather boost my stamina, that will allow me to dominate any enemy I will fight."
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
Can he gather dream energy to give himself increasingly large amounts of stamina until he can eventually give himself infinite stanima?
"I advise you guys to think carefully. If that can help you, know that I chose to prioritize my stamina. My future fighting style will rely heavily on my multiple abilities, so I will need a big stamina pool, plus, it's not like I will lack raw power with our bodies that will automatically get stronger, so I rather boost my stamina, that will allow me to dominate any enemy I will fight."
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
Nice quirk name!
"You are right... Then I shall call my quirk Dusk, the end of the day, a name fitting for a quirk that shall bring forth the end of the light hehehe..."
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
exept where there is light as darkness is merely the absence of light
All the abilities I chose can be put under the banner of darkness manipulation... that is the path I chose. I chose this as my quirk because I think darkness is something extremely versatile, it has no predetermined form, and it can become anything. The last reason that pushed me towards that path is simple... Darkness is everywhere."
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
week not weak (used the word for lacking strength instead of the unit of time you meant to use
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
Was he chugging orange juice for 2 hours straight or just enjoying a glass or 2 slowly over the course of 2 hours?
Just like that, Dante spent the next two hours drinking orange juice (he was still five years old after all) and thinking of how he would use the abilities he would give himself. It was only after two hours that Dante was finally joined by one of his three friends.
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
You never specifically state what Hyato's choice was only that he made it. Is that due to building suspense or did I just misread?
ch 14 Shock and Awe! Simple is The Best!
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Anime & Comics · Black_Nemesis
Neat!
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Video Games · unfortunateGambler