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These ‘BOOM’s are giving me heart palpitations. Author, I know you do this on purpose and just wanted to commend you for ALWAYS getting me with it! Yes it’s frustrating, but I somehow can’t even be mad about it!

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Thanks for the chapter!!!

Just commenting because I know it’s good for the novel and it’s an awesome chapter

Commenting per Author request! The story is absolutely awesome. Good blend of innocence and decisive violence.

Thanks for the chapter! I’ll pop over to Eromancer as long as it will be getting more chapters - abandoned stories make me sad (pokes you for more Running God when you’re feeling it)

Li’l Tolly is back on the main stage (where he deserves to be). Here’s hoping a particularly adorable mink starts feeling competitive…

Really enjoying the tone, Author! As long as Sol keeps his edge when needed, it’s good to be reminded he’s just a kid learning how things work. His innocence has been a great contrast to his trauma, rage, and willingness to do violence; however particularly in the last couple of chapters introducing the idea of finding new community, romance and more adult concepts seems appropriate to the age he’s getting to. It’s also a more balanced approach to character development which feels less forced and more like it’ll transition as the story progresses. Although I have to note that hair doesn’t actually grow that fast (unless it’s a hidden plot point or something to do with his parentage)

Sunny is probably the best example of organic and sustainable character growth in any novel or webnovel I’ve ever read. Knowing that beneficial actions of the past don’t give leeway for apathetic or misanthropic actions in the present is another step for Sunny, who once would have excused any action required to get from one day to the next, let alone improving your own situation in the process.

I love the fact that Riley keeps saying it, and no one believes him (because they don’t want to) but it keeps being confirmed and confirmed. Poor Universe. Poor Navi. Poor Riley. And poor Alice.

So Sunny is running on empty again? Where that little nightmare jerk hiding? Because last time our Sunny was tapped out he showed up to take a bite to go…

The actual burst of laughter that came out of my lungs just scared my partner and my cats. Seriously, I’m SINCERELY hoping that there’s no twist and that the three idiots just keep failing miserably. I’m begging you. Please. It’s such a perfect contrast to Leo just winning and being serious.

Oh Aritzia. Ya done f’ed up… But thanks, our boy needed some motivation to get serious.