Ehijie_Rejoice

10mth

Commented

I thought the goblin had one sword?

The goblin's movements were staggered as it picked one of his swords.

Beast Evolution

Fantasy · Mhizta_Ray

Ehijie_Rejoice

10mth

Posted

In my opinion you have a nice idea but poor world background building, no proper foundation was made and it seemed rushed. No detailed explanation on your country's history, not everyone is versed in your country's history😏

Road to the Crown

History · MotivatedSloth

Ehijie_Rejoice

10mth

Posted

Can someone be nice and please comment Khan's main combat weapon🙏

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

Ehijie_Rejoice

10mth

Replied to LeftPinky

no her organ 😂😂

Martha could understand part of Khan's story by herself. She knew that he had lied to the nurse, so his mana core had to be quite good. She felt sure that her organ was inferior, but she never gave voice to those thoughts to maintain some secrecy.

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

Ehijie_Rejoice

1yr

Replied to Nikka_boy

i came to check if I was the only one who had that thought😂

Naruto was also glad that Dog was looking after him since he knew that Dog had protected him in the past, although he had no idea who Dog was.

Naruto: the gamer system

Anime & Comics · Washuru

Ehijie_Rejoice

1yr

Posted

This is a nice work, I wish I could get more books like this ( who ever have a recommendation will be appreciated). Nice character development and design, even making your own world background out of the original is lovely😍 and will hopefully see some romance in the future😏 but please no harem it will brake my fragile heart😞