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How does it consider NTR if all minds are connected to the same person not like their own personality they’re the same personality over different body

Have you heard of the legend of the floating island In the Bermuda triangle it says that if you pass through it, you will find a floating island and a huge island underneath it says that any disease that you want cured could be fixed there. The only price you have to pay is you have to stay on the island or you will return 10 V and to give your loyalty to the king of the floating island and not betray him

Don’t drop but look at new anime , cartoons , and manga to add to the story mix

Fix the spacing

Make the restaurant owner not over pellet character outside, please but just inside his back so it’s more believable and let them go down the characters in the old university and their timeline. Heck adventure with each patriots comes in to the restaurant that way you don’t have to always think of multiple ones, but just to one and then go to the next world that you feel your character can help or just hang there mini arts look at new characters I suggest the monsters the guy that becomes the goblin or the incarnated as the seventh Prince go to all anime and you find doesn’t of world that you can use as a base

I love the concept and I would like to keep reading more of it. Don’t give up on this story. Some people rarely put reviews on the power stones that will get you peoples interest.

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I would suggest doing either Fnaf VR or a type of card game where the cards actually come to life in VR so it has its own spin to it